How does the second poem, written a few years after the conference at Fisk University, serve as a kind of commentary on the first? Which of the poems in your opinion is more politically charged?
“Of De Witt Williams on his way to Lincoln Cemetery” is a poem about a “plain black boy” whose casket is being taken to the Lincoln Cemetery. The speaker of the poem mentions places such as “the Pool Hall” and “the Show” where the boy spent much of his time when he was alive. There is mention of the casket being taken “down through Forty-seventh Street:/ Underneath the L.” A person familiar with Chicago would know that these places are very much prevalent to criminal activity, typically committed by African American’s of the lower class. In this poem the reader is not told how the main character dies. In “The Boy Died in My Alley” we are introduced to a more serious, more somber tone. Though “Of De Witt Williams on his way to Lincoln Cemetery” does not exactly have a happy tone, it appears that De Witt Williams’ death is not nearly as tragic as the boy who died in the alley in the second poem. The speaker in “The Boy Died in My Alley” indirectly describes the neighborhood in which he lives in. The speaker states, “The Shot that killed him yes I heard/ as I heard the Thousand shots before.” Given this piece of text, the reader can agree that the neighborhood is probably one in which the sound of gunshots is nothing uncommon therefore hinting at an extremely dangerous neighborhood. For someone to hear a gunshot and not be concerned about it is the tantamount of seeing someone lying dead on the floor and merely walking past them as though it were not something of great importance. The second poem by Brooks appears to be far more intense than the first. The poem depicts the black society as a group of emotionless and undisturbed peoples. The dying boy’s “cry climbed up the alley” and “up to the wind.” Nobody was willing to help the boy even though his cry pierced through the night. The speaker, probably an African American living in the neighborhood, sates “I joined the Wild and killed him with knowledgeable unknowing.” It is important to note here that the word “wild” is capitalized. The capitalization of the word probably suggests that the speaker’s view on the people living in the neighborhood, who did not help the boy, is negative. Comparing people with “the Wild” conveys a serious tone, which we do not necessarily get from “Of De Witt Williams on his way to the Lincoln Cemetery.” The death in “The Boy Died in My Alley” is tragic as it tells the reader that the boy begged for help but no one stopped to do so. The unwillingness for people to help him can suggest that the people living in the area are too far gone- too disconnected to care for anyone or anything; the people are exhausted. In my opinion, the second poem is definitely more politically charged. When a group of people become emotionally unattached due to the poor living conditions, the government is usually a direct correlation to the happenings in the given area.